Occasionally in my writing life, I reach a point where I have questions that need to be answered before I can proceed. Sometimes these are questions about the effectiveness of an elliptical poem or what the intention of my poem will be; other times, it is searching for advice on how to end a story.
Below, I have included a portion of Cat Rambo’s take on “three things that end a story well,” originally posted on her blog, “The World Remains Mysterious: The Writing of Cat Rambo.”
While more experienced fiction writers may find this advice to be “obvious,” I found the following pieces of advice to be important reminders in writing… and I also realized that one of my previous stories is only a third of the way done, rather than reaching its end… (consider that as a preview of what’s to come).
(One of) Cat Rambo’s 3 Things That End A Story Well
1) Circularity is a big help. It provides a sense that the reader has returned to the beginning, but now everything is changed. Here’s a cheat – take something that appears in your first three paragraphs and invoke it in your last three as well. It can be changed – the rose that initially trembled, dew-covered, as our heroine picked it is now lying withered and flat in the road. Or it is a new rose, being picked by another woman who is the replacement for the first?
For an example of this, I’m actually going to be obnoxious and point to my own story, Magnificent Pigs. Technically I cheat, because the object I used doesn’t appear until the fourth paragraph, the brass bed which creaks in protest as Aaron sits down. At the end it’s become the object of Jilly’s salvation, the vehicle that carries her away into the sky. There’s other reappearing things: pigs are mentioned right off the bat (in the title, even) and they’re crucial to the end. And the story begins and ends with the idea of death and (hopefully) changes your perception of it.
Again, to read Rambo’s piece in its entirety, please visit her blog.